Thread:SilentknightA/@comment-31236593-20200413042430/@comment-31573460-20200413073758

Sure. But I will likely not do an entire rundown of another visual novel for some time. To be honest, the whole Under Eden page was suppose to an April Fools joke that took way too long to do, and I thought it would be the saftest page to alter. FYI the joke was suppose to be that the page covered the actually events of the visual novels. I was half expecting the changes to be removed or heavily altered. I kind of wanted to see how you would have added on to the events to fit in that whole "Tatsurou travels through time to save Yukikaze and Rinko" story. Also, I don't really know enough about your fan-fic to give an acurate description of the events you are going for, or know what I can alter. For example, the pages covering the Bloodlord Cara characters does not follow the visual novel at all.